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Alen · member Member # Joined: 27 Oct 1999 Posts: 80

Hey, did this in class(sorry for the lined paper) the other day. I'm not an anatomy expert, so i wanted to check it for any errors before i got into the details. The lightsaber is in the works right now, and the right(his left) leg looks a little weird. I'm trying to fix that now.
So, if any of you could help me out, I'd appreciate it, crit away..
Thanks a lot.

Kuku · junior member Member # Joined: 22 Apr 2002 Posts: 17

i think the arms are too short, and hands are too small... seems like you got a little shy there

other proportions seem fine, you might want to change the feet a bit, since the big toe seems to stick out too far on them... just look at your own feet.
big toe and the next toe are almost the same lenght, at least they are on my feet

which class are you spacing out on, btw?

Alen · member Member # Joined: 27 Oct 1999 Posts: 80

That would be english.. :/
I fixed the feet, I'll make the arms a little longer, and I'm not sure about the hands. His left(our right) hand seems about right. The left one might need a little sizing up?

Alen · member Member # Joined: 27 Oct 1999 Posts: 80

update..

did another one(on clean paper this time

), although, i think i gave him gorilla arms this time around

or are his legs a little too short?

[edit]looks like making the legs longer fixes the problem, anyone see any other problems?[/edit]

[ May 05, 2002: Message edited by: Alen ]

ixs · junior member Member # Joined: 08 Aug 2001 Posts: 13

The weapon hand is too small. The bicep also should be 'facing' the viewer. Try the same pose in a mirror and take a look at your own arm.