[Iman]

begging you...

I want harsh criticism.. tell me how crap my scene is.. its a photo manipulation/sketch..
I havent used my tablet in ages.. its crap...

Ive blatantly ripped anthony hopkins' eyes, the other pics are mine and Im absolutely awful at drawing that mask..

what a waste of resource I am...
I should stick to web design.


Iman

PLEASE REPLY...


[ May 04, 2002: Message edited by: Iman ]

[ May 04, 2002: Message edited by: Iman ]

[Torstein Nordstrand]

I think it works well spacially, and there is definitely story working here. Reminds me of the Maltese Falcon. So I agree with proportions. But how about more interest? A slight tone, be it Sepia or whatnot? Two small scaled people in the lower left? It borders on movie poster imagery.

What don't you like? I think it needs more symbols to be gothic, but who cares? There's an eerie feeling going on. Develop the story, and you'll probably discover more appropriate symbols to include. More misty wind movement, or perhaps drapery to tie things together?

[Iman]

thank you Torstein... Im bearing all those things you said in mind while I rework it..I did try to run a sepia tone on it and it looked better..cheers )

I dont like the fact that its very sketchy, I guess in my line of work, *web /interface design* Im used to clean lines, and sharp edges.. I too often forget the workings and importance of shade and curves..

I liked your comment about it having a narrative.. I'll try and develop that further..
thanks again
your comment are appreciated...

ps. I liked the work on your site..particularly demons veil.. :>