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 Posted: Fri May 03, 2002 5:38 am |
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Hello all, long time no post 
Here's one of my newer sketches. I want to try and "finish" this (in a comic-book b/w fashion), so, please dump a comment or two, feedback is highly appreciated!
Updated sketch:
Previous sketch
Cheers
[ May 04, 2002: Message edited by: zpawn ] |
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| Posted: Fri May 03, 2002 9:50 pm |
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You need to work on "faces" more.. faces too but I'm talking about 3d faces.. flat planes..
work on 3d shapes more... |
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| Posted: Sat May 04, 2002 8:22 am |
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Hey, thanks for your feedback.
Yes, planes, get you. I'll spend more attention to them.
And faces, I've noticed they look a bit skewed in this sketch... Nothing that can't be fixed however, I'll try updating this soon.
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| Posted: Sat May 04, 2002 10:32 am |
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I've updated with a new sketch, drawn from scratch, where I've tried to pay more attention to planes and 3d shapes.
I've noticed I screwed up the proportions a bit, but they're not main priority at this stage
Comments on progress so far is welcome!
[ May 04, 2002: Message edited by: zpawn ] |
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