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BASTION · Posted: Tue Apr 30, 2002 9:04 pm

yep your stereotypical good soldier, he is royalty, captain of the guards but also a bit of a pig. as with the others all advice will be taken on board so please let me know what you think

Kuku · junior member Member # Joined: 22 Apr 2002 Posts: 17

Very nice design, I love your inking.

I think the cape on his shoulders should be a litte lower, seems its just too thick there.
Also, if he has a same palduron on his right shoulder as he wears on the left I think that would also alter the way the cape is going down the arm.

BASTION · Posted: Tue Apr 30, 2002 10:22 pm

thanks for the advice, as for the shoulder guard I only intended him to have it on the one arm.

saladbowl · Posted: Wed May 01, 2002 4:38 am

I like him, but the shoulders don't seem wide enough.
The rest is cool.
His face is a Matter of taste and I don't like it.

Dedalus · Posted: Wed May 01, 2002 9:16 am

This is very nice, I like it a lot.

I do agree with Kuku about his neck looking to thick because of the cape. His shoulder's shouldn't form such rounded curve, they should be squared up a bit. Also his feet look off. Is he not wearing actual boots? Either way the heel could be shortened I think.

Hope that little crit helps. I really love the sword, very cool design. I like the way you did your cape 'trim' too. Keep it up.

BASTION · Posted: Wed May 01, 2002 2:54 pm

thanks for all the suggestions, I will definitely re-do this guys face. Allmost everyone said it sucks

BASTION · Posted: Thu May 02, 2002 5:16 pm

check out the finished version of this here http://www.sijun.com/cgi-bin/ultimatebb.cgi?ubb=get_topic&f=5&t=008244

poxen · Posted: Fri May 03, 2002 12:26 am

Yo
wow, thats really nice!
the pose i great! i whould love to se the sketch if there is any? se how you work.