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poxen
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 Posted: Thu May 02, 2002 5:00 am |
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yo
i have this pic whitch i have worked on for some time now and i cant get it finished! It looked good in the begining, but now gahh! its to blurry, the pose is wierd, bla bla...it is baaad. hate it!  So if you could help me get on the right track again. Clear out the things that are wrong and soo on. help me get it finished!
plz
here you have him!, tha Dwarf warrior whit the huuuge hammers! �rk. 
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Basse_Ex
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| Posted: Thu May 02, 2002 9:54 am |
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The head is WAY too large. Even for a dwarf.
....(Uless you charicaturize it a bit more and make it a "funny dwart")....
The pose is also a little bland. Almost looks like you've really drawn a sitting model then removed the chair.
The face is real nice, but he's got no expression on it. I don't know, maybe he's an uninterested and tired dwarf, but for this kind of picture I would rather go for a dwarf that says "RAAAAARRGGHHH!!!"
....(Or something)....
But it's got a lot of nice elements in it. Fix the head and the face, and perhaps move one leg further behind(So he's more running\jumping) and it could become very cool indeed. |
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Bilbo
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| Posted: Thu May 02, 2002 12:05 pm |
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This is really nice..i love the palette.
the thing which is bothering me the most is the proportions. the body looks too thin, it doesn't have the stockyness usually associated with dwarves. seems like a muscular human with an exceptionaly big head.
i'd also like to see some nice cast shadows. |
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poxen
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| Posted: Thu May 02, 2002 1:29 pm |
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Basse_Ex- yea the head is large, but it is ment to be soo, or it was. I wanted it to be more "funny dwarf" in the begining but now, noo. So yea, to big head. oh yes the pose, have changed those leegs to many times, hehe. but the upper body, the pose there is more right. I am happy with his left arm (his left arm). Expression, yea, that could make the it more intresting, yea.
thx!
Bilbo- Thx! Yea the palett is nice, but the ground, should i make it dark or paint a light source there that shines on him? hmm.
To thin, yea..i should need to look at some other dwarf pictures? if you have any post em! cast shadows, not my stronges part. 
but i will try! hehe
thx! |
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Basse_Ex
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| Posted: Thu May 02, 2002 4:38 pm |
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If it's supposed to be a funny dwarf, then, well, it needs to get... well... funnier. More over-the-top. It's far too... well... pretty.
Let yourself go a little, make him ugly.
Ugly goes a long way...
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