[razzak]

here is a little fanart from me, i know about the girls arm its screwed. i need to fix that, but other than that what you think? i ws thinking about making 3d models of them and a short fighting scene animation thingy. c'n'c welcome


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[Guy-Incognito]

Hey there razzak

The girls arm isn't that bad. Just make her elbow smaller. How did you draw this (pen, mouse, other)?

This would look great with strong colours

[razzak]

heres how far i am so far i decided on the colours, so thats good, i started shading the face and im gonna me rin's eyes really glare out. i fixed the arm.
i did this on paper and scanned it in, but the stupid scanner made everything pixely. o well.


[ April 07, 2002: Message edited by: razzak ]

[Guy-Incognito]

Starting to look good now.

Try to avoid over-shading the skin (particularly on his leg).

Keep it up

[razzak]

here is another update. im kinda through with all the shading, now its up to the refining stages

[jdillon]

It's very nice, but I almost feel like you don't need quite so many folds, especially on Manji's clothes. Naturally, with this type of outfit you'll see a lot of folds, but the clothing here looks a little too wrinkled and baggy and doesn't look like it fits on his body very well. Sketch out the form of the body beneath the clothes, and consider how and where the clothing should bunch up or lie flat. For instance, the clothing should (for the most part) lie flat along his shoulders; it will only bunch up when something pulls or twists it (such as along the waist on on the sleeves). Something about his pose feels a little awkward, too, almost like he's leaning too far forward and his legs aren't quite long enough. It's hard to tell.. :/ Overall, I think it's coming along well, though

I like the sword turned out, and Manji's hair. :3 (I've always had problems drawing Manji's hair for some reason...) Rin is coming along well, but her rear is a little too small and pointy, and her legs too short. Just flesh out her lower body a bit and she'll be fine. ^_^

Also, one nitpicky thing: they don't seem to be anchored in space very well. They're just floating in midair.. Maybe put some shadows beneath them and a hint of scenery (even something simple, like a distant, mountainy horizon and moon in the sky).

Aside from that, it looks good. Keep up the good work!

-Julie

[razzak]

hey, thats cool, thanks for the pointers. ill definitely follow them up. i know, manji looks a bit of a pillow definitely less folds. ill fix rins back too. very helpful. ill try to update sometime today.

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[razzak]

heres another update. i fixed the folds, i thgink they look better now. im working on the bg. i hope you like it.