[Thuduil]

hello! this just started off as a lil doodle but ive spruced it up a little...still it needs alot of work..feel free to comment on anything cause im not very good at rendering so any tips would be much appreciated thanx!

[Sumaleth]

You're detailing too soon, you're better off working out all the gross shading first. Work out where the light source is and work up the contrast based on how the light would fall across the shapes. Good values are the most important part of any image - if you get those right then detailing will be pure bonus.

[Thuduil]

hmm..so do u think i should start over with the colour?