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Vertigoblack
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 Posted: Sun Apr 07, 2002 9:36 pm |
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what did you think i meant???!!  crits and comments welcome. i posted a few times before, but noone seems to wanna critique my art.
third time's a charm...hopefully.   |
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faeklone
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| Posted: Sun Apr 07, 2002 9:45 pm |
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| kewl sketchy look. The only problem I have with it is the ear: it is possible that it should be behind the ear, barring that it is too close to the face. Add some colouring and that thing should look so sweet. |
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RavenBlack
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| Posted: Mon Apr 08, 2002 2:22 am |
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ha... that is cool.. the eyes always tell it all... I agree with the above post about hair being a little high.. I think that line up their bring it down and it'll look phat.. but the facial expressions so far are working great, but the mouth is needed to finish the emotion.. could turn the ears back a little... or turn them in opposite directions a little.. kinda like a animal does when it makes a wierd emotion like confusion. people do it to, its just not as noticeable.
Rav
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Vertigoblack
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| Posted: Mon Apr 08, 2002 12:11 pm |
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| thanks for the insights...i see what you mean about the ear... |
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Basement bound
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| Posted: Mon Apr 08, 2002 11:45 pm |
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Dy-no-mite!! I love this sketch.
The only thing that I would look back at is her ear, looks kinda out of splice with the head. I love it, I love it, I love it!!!!
it is just so simple, *sigh*
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