[Sirbakk]

hi everybody

well, I'm interesting to read your comments about design of my website.
All links work fine but still under construction, and 3d pics are so old!!

...I' ll update my works later.

[Sirbakk]

oups :-))
www.gargga.fr.st

[Gort]

Bonjour!

Be mindful that my main comments are directed to "content delivery", and my assessment is rather focused on that respect.

I come to your site, and I an presented with a splash screen directing me to enter by click through; a window is spawned with your preloading .swf. When done preloading I then have to click again to start actually seeing your content. So you have a unique domain that you pitch to users for your content, but the user has to go through a two click/step process to get to the content; shouldn't the unique domain that you registered be the kick off point for your site? Two clicks is in my opinion too much work; having 'enter' then "enter" again is redundant navigation.

On the preloading screen:
You have a Runtime Error on line 7 - "invalid argument". Might not be a show stopper but perhaps worth checking.

Also the "star(?)" graphic is not intuitive for accessing - especially with "Enter" right below it; the first impression is to click on "Entre". Don't make navigating your site a guessing game; use standard conventions - especially if you're pitching your site to potential employers; they want to see what you do and what've got - right now. Chances are that if people don't get it, they will leave.

The large, primary navigation elements in the center fo the page seems to throw the composition off. I would suggest a consideration towards aligning it more to the right with the tendrils out left thus lending a more visual, circular continuity; your gallery window (which by the way clicking on the images creats another line 7 invalid argument error) might be better serve to the left with that rotating thingy in less prominance (it's continuing, looping rotation is a bit distracting). I know you're gallery window is reserved for the upper right, but when it is isn't present the site looks center heavy thus giving the right side a dead space look.

The little email icon looks a bit cartoony for the rest of the look and feel. You have a real interesting look and feel going on here, but the letter icon doens't seem consistent with it.

Aside from that, I think what you've done so far is great looking - I like the look and feel. Nice work overall!!



-tom

[Sirbakk]

Thanks!!!..i didn't hope a great comment like that..:-)..thx again
You're right about naviguation...maybe I'll build an HTML release, to allow an basic and speed access to contents..
I like games, and i'm looking for jobs as gamedesigner or 3d modeler,so it s important for me to play with my website..
so, i'm going to build this realease...giving a choice to visitors and especially to potentials employers
About bugs ("line errors")...i'll watch that
and the little icon to e-mail me, it's an temporary icon

others comments?


really thx guy..bye

[Gort]

You are welcome!

Yes - having a high bandwidth (flash) and low bandwidth (html) entry point isn't a bad idea - it's pretty common.

I wouldn't worry too mcuh about the runtime error(s) - I have Visual Interdev installed on my box, so it picks up the slightest issues; you'd be amazed at how many high profile sites out there deliver runtime errors (CNN, ABC, etc).

Keep us posted on the future developments.