[d.a.r.y.l.]

Hey

I'd love to get some feedback on how to improve this image. anatomy problems, color setup and whatever to make it look more solid and interesting. disregard the sketchy look.

thanks alot,

.d.

[Guy-Incognito]

The left cheekbone is too intense. It looks like it is popping out of his face. His Adams apple looks a bit wrong.

To make it look more solid you need to define the edges more. Make the background contrast with his face more then create some hi-lights.

Keep it up.

[ April 05, 2002: Message edited by: Guy-Incognito ]

[d.a.r.y.l.]

thanks for your reply. you are right, his cheekbone was exaggerated but since I dont have that on his left side it looks bad. and his adams apple is prolly too far to the right. I'll fiddle around with background VS the face as well as define edges more. thanks again.

Any more takers?

.d.