[edraket]

Hi,

Doing this assignment for an illustration class. It's about how I stand in the world.
I've been trying not to go into detail but look at the composition. I might not be able to go into detail at all because this is due on thursday.

Maybe someone can give me some pointers on how to integrate the elements better. Actually any pointer would be very welcome.

[hunter_rose0]

It looks great. The buildings do look completly different than the rest of the image and it works well that way. But if you want to make the image more unified then paint the buildings instead of using photographs.

[edraket]

Hey, thanks.
The use of photo's wasn't the greatest choice. It's more that I was trying to show that collage type techniques can be taken a bit further. I am not very fond of collages. But the people that I will be showing this to are. And they have to admit me to their art college so I thought I'd give it a try in my own way.

Anyways..I worked on it a bit more...



[ March 26, 2002: Message edited by: edraket ]

[bizk]

a more balanced (50/50) contrast of the green colors could help (i think)

I like the idea of the image very much