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Futura
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 Posted: Thu Mar 21, 2002 2:59 pm |
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So, I started this one yesterday and have been working on it, um, a lot. Haven't finished the background yet. Tell me what you think of it, what should be improved, random snide comments, or whatever...
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ZippZopp
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| Posted: Thu Mar 21, 2002 3:13 pm |
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| looks good! I would add more shading around the eyes to give them more depth, as well as in the forehead to give it a more full volumetric feeling...the eyes and forehead look a little flat...Just needs more contrast!! but keep goin with it, it looks good |
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saladbowl
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| Posted: Thu Mar 21, 2002 4:02 pm |
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looks cool and I agree with the points above, but : Damn, her head is huge compare to her torso...!
Maybe you can change that...  |
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Dekard
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| Posted: Fri Mar 22, 2002 4:29 am |
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Yeah looks good but I think you need to work on proportions a bit, the head looks a bit like a typical 'grey alien' head, the eyes look huge compared to the rest of the face.
Good start though. |
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