| View previous topic :: View next topic |
| Author |
Topic : "A Leprechaun for St. Patrick's Day (WIP)" |
Cannibal
junior member
Member #
Joined: 23 Feb 2001
Posts: 9
Location: Orlando, FL
|
 Posted: Mon Mar 18, 2002 6:50 am |
 |
 |
In Progress. Crits welcome.
 |
|
| Back to top |
|
P'tit Ben
member
Member #
Joined: 25 Jan 2001
Posts: 143
Location: Lyon, France
|
| Posted: Mon Mar 18, 2002 9:49 am |
|
|
Nice ! really nice! can't wait to see it finished!
Do you plan to contrast the color a little more, or do you plan to keep this pastel style? |
|
| Back to top |
|
macho2k
member
Member #
Joined: 20 Oct 2000
Posts: 121
Location: V�xj�, Sweden
|
| Posted: Tue Mar 19, 2002 4:10 am |
|
|
he looks greedy!! just the way i want him!! I hope he dont visit me and take all my gold..!! nice work, love to see the finished piece...  |
|
| Back to top |
|
edraket
member
Member #
Joined: 18 Sep 2001
Posts: 505
Location: Rotterdam, The Netherlands
|
| Posted: Tue Mar 19, 2002 4:38 am |
|
|
I like:
His face..the shading on his pants.
I don't like:
The back of his head. (It seems to point out too far and be too sharp.)
I'd also make the face a little more contrasty. But maybe thats something you were already going to do anyways. Being WIP and all. |
|
| Back to top |
|
Mat Pan
junior member
Member #
Joined: 17 Mar 2002
Posts: 5
Location: Argentina
|
| Posted: Tue Mar 19, 2002 7:27 am |
|
|
I like that one!!
You shoul try fixing his right hand (the one holdig the staff), it is somehow bogus, like if seen from below, it doesn�t match the perspective of the rest of the drawing.
And yeah, use more contrast, specially on the face, remark his expresion a bit more, some wrinkles would do perfect!
keep it up! |
|
| Back to top |
|
Marakaz Buzjuz
member
Member #
Joined: 08 Jan 2002
Posts: 63
Location: Amsterdam
|
| Posted: Tue Mar 19, 2002 8:01 am |
|
|
wow.. very cool, like to see the finished piece
[ March 19, 2002: Message edited by: Marakaz Buzjuz ] |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
