[ELLioT]

I was really enthousiastic about that piece at the beginning but now, I'm getting a little bored about it. The NASA-like exploration robots are not cool, I think. Crits & comments are welcome, I need some motivation...

[andreasj]

I don�t know. Maybe try to cut down on the amount of colours? As it is now, the red, blue and yellow gives it a bit too ... jolly feeling. Perhaps it would be better off with a colour-scheme more dramatic?

There�s something about the layout that really drawed my attention.

[kad]

Its good, but im not quite sure i like the pose the lady is in.The way her clothing is pulled of and the look of fear in her eyes may insinuate something. Unless thats what you are trying to convey..

I would say to redo the picture with a more seductive or mischevious look to her so others dont get the wrong idea.

But its a great start.. i think if you are still inspired by it finish it.

[strata]

wouldn't she be a bit cold?

[tek9z]

try a less stiff pose for the astronauts
less upright maybe.
good rock part next to the woman!
beautiful pose too.
i wish i was that robot.
but em.. how does she breathe?

[ELLioT]

Thanks for comments, guys.

Well:
1-Yes I guess it's cold out there

2-In french we have this word "ing�nuit�" meaning "some kind of a child charming capability not to be concerned by anything". Maybe that "skill" led her to notice that this planet's atmosphere was quite breathable... I don't know.

3-Yes colors are too funcky, I ll try to set to a softer color-chord.

4-Some elements are still missing (and may be missing forever) in the composition, They could explain her presence in such an ??uncongrous?? place...

I'll keep you informed of any progress in this work. Thx.