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hethebar
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 Posted: Tue Feb 26, 2002 8:48 am |
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Hey people, these are due in 2 days and I want to present the finished work in some sort of graphical way. What I mean by this is that instead of just having the illustration as is I would like to integrate type (the character's name) and other design elements so that it looks publishable. This is probably a little confusing but if you understad, drop me a note.
thanks/hethe |
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wigin
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| Posted: Tue Feb 26, 2002 11:34 am |
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Hmmm well im really not sure how you could finish them off.. Maybe in a Pop art kinda way?? Flat colours and vibrant??? WIth heavy thick contour
Anyways YOU ARE MY HERO lol.. I love you characters..I really enjoy your art...
Anyways just thought i would point out a few things i think look wrong and confuses me..
hope the pictures are self explanatory
Whats going on around the back area???
The shadow looked wrong to me.. tell me if this looks better or makes more sense?
Anyways hope i helped a tiny bit...
BTW you on icq or msn messenger?
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hethebar
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| Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2002 1:36 pm |
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well, I took as much of my friend wigin's advice as I could at this point and pretty much finished up the pics (i put them in the finished gallery). i just couldn't lose that cast shadow though. Thanks again wigin!
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