[CavEmaN]

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Pencil and paint ... just a quickie to see if cartoony and old mix ... I personally think it looks horrid ...
I still got to fix the armour and sharpen the gun ... IMO the gun looks ugly ...Any ideas on fixing the light and contrast on the armour?

[ February 22, 2002: Message edited by: CavEmaN ]

[thor64]

the lightning is too much...
and the rest a little to dark...
you should start on the picture not concentrating that much on those two 'effects' mentioned above (lightning/dark).
The face of the soldier is great - though the eyes are too white (lightning again?)
About his pose - well if he is sitting there waiting the rifle's position is ok, but if he is running and ducking, then you might consider turning the rifle more horizontal. IMO it's difficult running with the rifle in that position.
About the Nazi monster thing... If it's a hole in the wall he (it, that is) is coming through - then adding some fingers/claws on both sides of the hole would be great - making it more dynamic. Keep it up

[thor64]

HEY is that a lens flare you've used on the Nazi Bastard!?!?! .... DON'T use it. Photoshop effects are great - in the beginning, but you don't want to make a picture tht says: "photoshop!!!"