[Wormius]

Hello all,

I've been lurking about for a while and enjoying all the great art and advice. I finally started on something that I like enough to put up for critique. It's all kinda roughed in, but you can see where I'm going with it. Can anyone spot any glaring errors that I'm just not seeing?

Also, I'm kinda unsure as to what colors to use in finishing the girl. I want her to stand out and have some life to her, but I don't want to add so much light and color that it sucks her right out of the picture.

Thanks!

[Vesper]

You've got a great start! I can't wait to see it finished.

I'd give the girl warm orange-y tones, like if she were infront of a hearth... But I'm sure whatever you decide to do, it will be great.

[jabber]

i love the water coverd ground, really nice. i would suggest in getting the person in the back there a different body shape. just because the woman in front, and the person in the shadows have a very similar body shape. its alsmost like a strange mirror. good job, keep going!