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Wiked Ewok member
Member # Joined: 19 Aug 2000 Posts: 215 Location: San Francisco, CA USA
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2002 4:36 pm |
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Whenever I sit down and do a digital painting in color, I try pretty hard to follow the coloring techniques I've learned from this board. I reflect light, try to do different texturing but all that doesn't show up in the final work. My paintings always look dull and flat. Am I painting too grayish? Or mixing desaturated and saturated colors wrong? Do I need more contrast? It just doesn't look right, and I hate it. It's been a while since I painted but here's one I did last night. If someone can do a repaint on any wrong values I would be very happy. Thanks.
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Basement bound member
Member # Joined: 11 Mar 2001 Posts: 874 Location: Calgary.ab.ca
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2002 4:55 pm |
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sorry can't see the image.
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Wiked Ewok member
Member # Joined: 19 Aug 2000 Posts: 215 Location: San Francisco, CA USA
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rain junior member
Member # Joined: 02 Aug 2001 Posts: 44 Location: Waterloo, ON
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2002 5:07 pm |
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I think it might be your figure ground relationships. try making the background darker on the side of the figure where the light is coming from. Study some good paintings, like sargent. |
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replicant junior member
Member # Joined: 13 Feb 2001 Posts: 49 Location: Alabama
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2002 6:43 pm |
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And just my 2 cents to add, other than this looks awesome, is to rotate the axe down more to where it is laying on his shoulder instead of just "floating" or being held up like that. Did that make sense?
Good job!
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Wiked Ewok member
Member # Joined: 19 Aug 2000 Posts: 215 Location: San Francisco, CA USA
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2002 8:37 pm |
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image redone:
I tried to get the colors right this time. I'm not even sure what I'm doing, but it more natural and has a better atmosphere, and I'm trying to figure out how to take this one step further and put in details, though I've been trying for quite a while and I'm too tired to do anymore work today. I think I've been playing too many textured 3d games. |
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dttrip junior member
Member # Joined: 26 Jan 2002 Posts: 34 Location: New York
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Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2002 10:37 am |
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its actually quite nice but the edges are a bit blurry...maybe you wanted it that way? |
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