[Guy]

well this is my first attempt at a portrait. also my first art posting now that i think of it hehe. anyway. it's not done obviously and i still need to add the lips. done several attemps, but they didnt turn out to great, but i'd like to know what you guys think of it at this stage right now. any serious issues that should get fixed now insted of later?



the skin tones arn't really realistic, but im not really worried about that. i also want to get rid of the lines eventualy, but thats proving to be kinda tricky too. anyway. crit away.

[ January 27, 2002: Message edited by: Guy ]

[Aius_Lytebringer]

I think you're off to a great start so far, Guy. Only thing I think you should look at is the shape of her head. It looks like her right cheek is bigger than her left. Personally I like her left one better
Keep working on it, it's awesome so far!

[Svarling]

Heh, I actually kinda like it this way.

The outlines gives the image a more stylish look

Try cutting the arms a little bit higher up with the background's colour. The purpose for that is too keep the stylish look.

Remember, it's just a tip
Keep up the good work!

/j.

[Guy]

thanks for the comments guys. i think i might leave the lines for this one. i need more practice with my painting i think.