[Eshara]

Welp, I've been having a hard time with anatomy for the last few months, but I think I'm starting to shape up some.

Anyway, I'm a little displeased with this woman's nose and lips, they don't look right. Also, I'm having a hard time with her iris's, whenever I add them they end up looking cross-eyed.

/sigh



Hope this is interesting enough for some replies.
C&C is welcome.

[ January 25, 2002: Message edited by: Eshara ]

[Ecanem]

first impressions: Nose is a bit flat - and the mouth is a little too much to the right of her face... Otherwise it looks good!

[specialbrew]

The color values are nice, but I think your problems are stemming from the fact that the basic skull understructure is incorrect and slightly twisted toward the viewer.



Above, I've tried to indicate where things should fall, working from your placement of the right eye and ear - hope it helps

sb

edit: url blunder

[ January 26, 2002: Message edited by: specialbrew ]

[razzak]

i know how it feels to not get the proportions right, if there is one thing that i can do then it is get them wrong. i have to compliment on the hair thou, how did you get that effect with the individual strands?

[Eshara]

Thank you everyone!

I'll have to work on her some more whenever I get into the mood again.

Specialbrew: Thank you, that should help me out a great deal.

Razzak: I've been getting into Painter 6 lately and the only brush I've been useing is the Opaque Bristle Spray (under brushes and the dab type set to bristle spray) for my coloring.