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Yurian Steinbogen
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it would be nice as well, if anyone could give some hints what I could change in this pic before I start to edit it in Photoshop !
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dogfood
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| Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2002 1:54 pm |
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There are some anatomy issues, especially regarding his right arm. The upper part is a bit balloonish, while the forearm is, well, just wrong, leading to an uninteresting and confusing hand postion. Strangly, the shadowed portion of the far arm is more pleasing than the other. Though not my area, the dragon seems lumpy and worm-ish to me. Boy, this sounds far more harsh than I was going for. Sorry.
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bld
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| Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2002 1:54 pm |
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| His right arm looks very wrong. |
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FrustratedARTist
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| Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2002 2:07 pm |
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| I think his right arm is like an insect arm right? |
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Granite
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| Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2002 2:43 pm |
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| Looks like its suppose to be an insect arm like stated above, so I think you can get away with it just fine if you rotate the claw part 90 degrees so that the blade pointed end is facing the viewer, I can do a drawover later if that doesnt make sense. |
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lalPOOO
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| Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2002 3:53 pm |
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| unlike everyone else, I dont see a problem with the arm really, and i think if you colour it right, it'll look amazing. |
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Yurian Steinbogen
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| Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2002 12:57 am |
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lik'ya see this is an unfinished pencil pic !i'm not so experienced in digitally artwork, so if anyone would like to edit my pic(please in PS), please conact me ! 
so long
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Yurian Steinbogen
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| Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2002 6:07 am |
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thanx for the critics it's no problem if critcs sounds harsh, as long as they're objective 
ok then I'll soon work on and try to "fix" it |
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