[Jolyon]

Hi everyone. Had an idea at home last night, sketched it out and scanned it this morning. This robot is just about to fall off the building into the high speed futuristic traffic below. I�m not sure why, but he must have done something like rape a vacuum cleaner or something ... anyway ...
I think the perspective should be a lot higher up maybe, so that we can see the street below and maybe the side of teh building he�s hanging onto, maybe so he doesn�t seem to be flying away from it? I haven�t been arsed to colour it because I want to know if anyone thinks it�s any good before I bother. So even if you do jsut read this msg reply and tell me waht you think... cheers!

[Jolyon]

By the way I am ill today and I feel like a pig shat in my head so... gimme a break about the typing

[Pat]

Ugh. That last comment paints a more vivid picture in my head than your drawing. I think that means you should either become a writer or work on fleshing out that sketch some more.

That's a dramatic point of view you've chosen for the image. The rewards will be great if you can successfully resolve the foreshortening.

-Pat

[Jolyon]

Nice to think other artists think I should take up writing instead... cheers anyway ... yes a very dramatic point of view... the foreshortening. Have you got any ideas or comments on how I can achieve this better? Any ideas or help would be greatly appreciated... anyway, I�d better get back to my writing thanks...

[dARCKLOWN]

theres just somthing about cool looking scetches that just fire me up somtimes i like them more than finished pics

[Marakaz Buzjuz]

very cool concept! and yeah I too like cool sketches (such as this one) more than finished drawings (most times)
for the street.. cant u just draw some lightlines that shows the traffic is really fast? like when the camera has been open very long so you can see the trace of the light.. sorry I'm Dutch
If I would change anything I'd emphesise the fear in his look even more.. plz show us your progress.

[lalPOOO]

hey I think that looks realy cool, but I'm pretty sure one of his hands is backwards