[Soulfuct]

Well.....ummm not much to say......needs loads of work......there are 2 progress shots....comments on the colours are particularly welcome......

[faustgfx]

"plz reply......i appreciate your words" -soulfuct/king�ting

[Soulfuct]

LOLOLOLOLLOL
well...its the thought that counts...but tell me something constructive bro!

[Galvatron]

All I can say Sheldon is that Its Damn Fine Work that deserves to get finished.....

In my opinion it looks a bit like a borg...but not quite wich makes it very original and interesting...well done comrade


Dave >

[Soulfuct]

thanx
I guess im gonna crit myself.
lol
ummmm I prefer the colours of the first progress shot and will probably resort back to them after laying down the whole grey base.
I think it gives it more of a fetish look.
I should have done the whole body but im feelings lazy.
As for a background....it is a splash of a website and it must stay grey.

I have a feeling this is Wolfenstein inspired.....as I've been playing alot of that game....but the first colours go with that theme better I guess.
ok im done....off to sleep ... dream's about cyborgs blowing things up..mainly humans ;o

[maceface]

hey shel i like the colors in the second one...even though i really dont know what they are...i am guessing its a green or something...anywho i think they like damn spiffy and i love this design

[Dr. Bang]

Shit, awesome pic! No critic since i believe mine will ruin your pic

[CyberArtist]

I like the gold on blue coloration, but the gold itself through out the rest of the "armor" looks odd. You could try a light blue / purple skin color on a grey / green metal armor. Brown / black leather for straps and some minor details would look good as well.

I really enjoy the details in this one as well ... though it feels like it's missing something that's in some of your other work ... namely falic images and tits. That, as you know from my prior responses is not a bad thing. hehehe.

His left shoulder looks wrong, like it's bent forward too much. The right pectoral plate also has a crookedness to it which might actually make for an interesting design element if you can make it look intentional. His left ear looks a little freakish, push it more in that direction as it looks good. Add some ridges along the ear lobes where they don't belong, etc. Right ear is too small, underdeveloped. The "flaps" on the helmet flatten the head. Try and give them more shape so they look like they curve over the top of the head piece. Same goes for the strap on the top of the head (the one that's under the helmet slightly), it comes to a point at the top which looks unnatural and makes the head appear flat.

Here's a quickie (ie: crappy) rework. I apologize in advace for this peice of shit.



Shoulders could actually use a little more pull back. There's also a little bit of green in the purple of the face.

[Soulfuct]

wow ok now this is a crit! i love it when you post in my topics.Cyber artist I will focus on these aspects....i plan to make this really stunning....and you have helped me..with smaller aspects that i had no payed attention to.thanx alot bro!

Mark...thanx alot man.....you better be doing good....I dun have you on my icq anymore but i hear youre on.....you should message me i wanna have a little talk with ya.
latas gents
KiNgStiNg

p.s im posting the finished version in Ben Henrys Robot thread when it is finished.
so check it out there.
until then keep the crits comming here!

[J-D Leon]

looks good.

but most of that stuffs on his head are useless.