[Soilwork]

Ok im a total newbie at large who needs extreme help, ive dont this.. prbly sucks.. i would need some pointers on what to fix and how to use colors and all. thanks!

[HawkOne]

Extreme help eh ...

First of all, I think you will need to put your picture on a webpage, this board don't seem to like ftp transfers ... if you had checked your post you might have noticed this ... ( you test it by deleting your temporary internet files in your webbrowser while not viewing the page with the graphic you are testing ...)

I had a look at your picture, and I'm not sure you have come past the stage where the only sound advice would be to practice more... it's not easy to give much comment on minimalist cartoon drawings ... I'd be frank and say that it probably haven't reached a stage where it can be appreciated by anyone other than yourself ...

To be able to teach yourself when it is time to ask for help is pretty important too ... in my opinion this drawing has not yet reached that stage ... learn to scrutinise your own work, it is just as important as learning to draw, and it is the only thing that will help you progress ... compare your work with similar artwork, learn to see where you are failing, and work on that part .. keep on doing that until you yourself are happy with the result, and THEN you can see if anyone else can help ...

keep on drawing ...