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Luke_de_Sade · Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2002 10:28 am

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This is a character design for a comic I'm working on. Her name is Thariel, and she's, yeah, you guessed it, an elf. The comic is gonna be called T&A (uh, suggestive name, isn't it? It means Thariel & Andrea, though).

Ok, I need some critiques and comments, people. What's wrong with her? Do you like it? Don't you? Could someone color her? I suck at coloring.

Oh, and please, no mention of her oobies, ok? Thanks.

Herr.O · Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2002 10:40 am

All I noticed is that the ears maybe a bit on the large side.. oh one more thing, no boots or something, just socks?

Luke_de_Sade · Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2002 10:46 am

Well, yeah. Long ears. It's because I'm a fan of Drew Hayes' Poison Elves. I like long ears on elves.

Oh, and the socks? Well, I was going to draw her at her house, so she was in socks there.

I know, I know, cheap, but it works.

Kaete · Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2002 11:10 am

Oh my, she certainly has generous...er... tracts of land.

I love the pants and the socks, though.

Luke_de_Sade · Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2002 11:29 am

Another quick sketch from the same T&A project.

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This is Licorice Whip. She is a dominatrix and ex-pornstar, also brother of Rick Von Lance (one of the main characters). She's also crazy as a mule.

Again, don't complain on the size of the oobies. She's an ex-pornstar, for God's sake!

Oh, and besides, the comic's gonna be called T&A for something, huh?

This is just a pencil sketch, mind you. I'm gonna ink it in a bit.

kantide · Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2002 11:35 am

Whoa!

She's pretty top heavy, how does she walk??? I really like the way you do the pants, good job!

Luke_de_Sade · Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2002 11:36 am

She walks like this: "Dammit...stupid heels...DAMMIT! I almost fell over!"

And thanks about the pants. That's all you like, though?

Oh, and the top-heaviness...she IS a former pornstar AND the comic's gonna be called T&A.

kantide · Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2002 11:46 am

Didn't mean to imply that that was all I liked, thats just what struck out at me most. I like your clean lines, you have a very nice style. I really like your face too. The perpective looks a little off on the second one though. Or maybe her massive breasts create an illusion of distortion.

Luke_de_Sade · Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2002 11:48 am

Oh, you like my face? I didn't know you cared

Hmmm, the perspective looks off? I can't see it. I'll have to fix that, though. Thanks for noticing that out.

wolfchick · Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2002 1:23 pm

I like the sexy little thong straps peeking out of the pants.

wolfie
^!!^

Marakaz Buzjuz · Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2002 1:44 pm

I think the perspective is off in her right shoe, I mean HER right one, the one most to the left

very cool pics dude

[ January 10, 2002: Message edited by: Marakaz Buzjuz ]

Tarandon · Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2002 2:29 pm

Her boobs create gravity wells which distort reality, that is her secret super power.

J.K

Im gonna say i like the pants, mostly because her breasts draw attention from everywhere else in the picture...

In case you didnt notice; I think the breasts are too big. Excessively so, It can still be called T&A even if her boobs aren't each bigger than her head.

Luke_de_Sade · Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2002 3:13 pm

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Originally posted by Tarandon:
In case you didnt notice; I think the breasts are too big. Excessively so, It can still be called T&A even if her boobs aren't each bigger than her head.

Yeah, well, funny thing is I used a model for that drawing. Not a real life one, but a picture. And yeah, it's an excessively large chest, but I'm a man of excesses. And a fanboy

Hey! Madureira did it and nobody says anything to him!

[ January 10, 2002: Message edited by: Luke_de_Sade ]

Luke_de_Sade · Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2002 3:15 pm

quote:
Originally posted by Marakaz Buzjuz:
I think the perspective is off in her right shoe, I mean HER right one, the one most to the left

very cool pics dude

[ January 10, 2002: Message edited by: Marakaz Buzjuz ]

Thanks. But you know...I ALREADY INKED THE PIECE!!! Damn! And now that you mention it, the perspective is off in her right foot. DAMN! Now what do I do? I inked it already! AAAAAAAARGH!!!

Luke_de_Sade · Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2002 4:17 pm

Inked version of Licorice Whip.

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SWANY · Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2002 7:23 pm

mmmm breasts

bottrishish · Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2002 7:50 am

Shes gonna have a bad back when she gets old.

Highfive · Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2002 9:45 am

Great perspective on the Licorice Whip girl. I'm serious, too.

Vesuvius · Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2002 10:04 am

quote:
Originally posted by Luke_de_Sade:

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This is Licorice Whip. She is a dominatrix and ex-pornstar, also brother of Rick Von Lance (one of the main characters).

she's his brother? she's a he? ..... uhhhh....

bottrishish · Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2002 10:31 am

I didnt think those were real.

Luke_de_Sade · Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2002 12:30 am

quote:
Originally posted by Vesuvius:
she's his brother? she's a he? ..... uhhhh....

I meant sister. Duh, sorry. I'm from Panama. Hehehe.