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Topic : "Dark Elf.....Need Crits Please!!!" |
Tarandon
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 Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2002 2:22 pm |
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Her boobs seem a little high on her chest, other that I have no quams.
Kudos. |
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Luke_de_Sade
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| Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2002 3:21 pm |
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Holy crenshaw, man! That's one mean drow!
Now, the only weird thing I see is the position of her feet to the rest of her body. She seems to be balancing forward and is about to topple. Other than that, that's one kickass piece. Love the spider details on her knees! Lolth should be proud. |
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Drawnblud
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| Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2002 10:45 pm |
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Thanks for the critiques everyone!! I know the pose is kind of funny, but I got it from a picture of a naked lady and that was how she was standing. I think she was getting ready to take a step or something.
I am glad that I've been getting pretty positive feedback on this. I'll post the colour version when it is done!! |
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Drawnblud
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| Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2002 12:15 am |
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Here is a pic that I am working on for someone...I need criticisms please....This is not the final. I'm trying to decide if her head is too large to the rest of her body.
Thanks!!! |
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mucha
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| Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2002 12:18 am |
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VERY nice -
I really like dark elves.
Pretty elves with a BAD ass attitude hehe.
*is this gonna be a eq profile pic?* |
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Highfive
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| Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2002 9:58 am |
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On her left arm, her forearm is thicker than her upper arm, and the elbow is on a wierd angle as well.
She's got a very fierce and determined expression. Awesome! |
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Kinten
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| Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2002 3:27 am |
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Like the others, I like it.
But I think it would look alot more balanced if you moved her right foot forward just a bit..
Cause the rest of her is in a rest position according to me.
I think the size of here head is ok.
*Waiting for the colored vesion*
Keep it up! |
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