[Vive]

I've been desperately trying to fix this picture. And after reading many of the threads on here I've realized there are a great many problems with it. But I'm at a loss for where to begin to solve them.

So I thought I'd ask for help.



- Vive

[jr]

it looks good, but the bridge of her nose looks too big, i wouldn't draw that line over there. frank frazetta use to draw chicks in those positions and it was just eyes, nose, and mouth.... without a bridge. try and see what happens without that line.