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IgnusDei
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 25, 2001 3:17 pm     Reply with quote
A pen drawing i'm working on

Crtiques?



[ December 25, 2001: Message edited by: IgnusDei ]
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bld
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 25, 2001 4:08 pm     Reply with quote
make it smaller next time. And wtf is it, a bomb?

Think more about positive/negative space with pen/ink images. Results can be dramatic.
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 25, 2001 4:53 pm     Reply with quote
Argh, the Robo-Sauron!!!!!

Yeah, a bunch of shadows and highlights would help define the shape better.

Sukhoi
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 25, 2001 8:12 pm     Reply with quote
(Moved to WIP)
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 25, 2001 8:23 pm     Reply with quote
Hey, clean up the lines, add a few gray tones and repost will help alot.

JA

Ps The pic just gave me an idea, mind if I step over the copyright line? Will credit and show you before I post.
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IgnusDei
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 25, 2001 8:35 pm     Reply with quote
be my guest!
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IgnusDei
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 26, 2001 12:49 am     Reply with quote
okay, here's a an improved version, with extra details.

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IgnusDei
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 28, 2001 5:50 am     Reply with quote
here;s another one. Im still develloping this one before i color it.



any suggestions?

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