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Pat member
Member # Joined: 06 Feb 2001 Posts: 947 Location: San Antonio
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Posted: Tue Dec 25, 2001 1:41 am |
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This started out as a speed painting, but when I looked up at the clock I'd spent about 2+ hours on it. Whoops. It was just coming along so nicely I kept working it. Anyway, didn't think it was fair to post it in that thread anymore.
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Mr. T member
Member # Joined: 22 Oct 2001 Posts: 516 Location: Croatia
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Posted: Tue Dec 25, 2001 5:08 am |
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everything looks great, but the container on the back of her head looks weird. try adding some depth there. |
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Cos member
Member # Joined: 05 Mar 2000 Posts: 1332 Location: UK
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Posted: Tue Dec 25, 2001 8:03 am |
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That chin dude... neat idea to the pic tho. |
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funkylizard junior member
Member # Joined: 08 Dec 2000 Posts: 33 Location: Toronto, Canada
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Posted: Tue Dec 25, 2001 8:35 am |
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Very nice! Reminds me of the movie AI! 2 hours huh? You bastard! That would take me a few days at least and I'm sure it wouldn't look that good! I think the container could use a bit more of a "3d" look but at the same time, it seems to work with the overall look of the piece!
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Pat member
Member # Joined: 06 Feb 2001 Posts: 947 Location: San Antonio
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Posted: Tue Dec 25, 2001 11:22 pm |
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Hey thanks for the input guys! Some great suggestions!
Mr. T, I'll work on that container. I totally forgot to add any type of reflected light on the bottom. It's not even a decent cylinder.
Cos, can you believe the chin was even larger at one point? I reigned it back quite a bit. Maybe some more would help.
funkylizard, I've been sketching a lot of robot gurls lately. Not sure what's up with that, but they're a lot of fun. It kinda reminds me of AI too.
Speve-o-matic, thanks for the tip on the bubbles. I was kinda thinking that when I was working on them, but I was at a loss on how to that. Maybe I'll go buy a plastic bottle of Sprite and check out the bubbles.
-Pat |
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Speve-o-matic member
Member # Joined: 25 Jun 2000 Posts: 198 Location: Johannesburg, South Africa
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Posted: Wed Dec 26, 2001 12:07 am |
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Hey Pat.
I like the skintones here, and ooohh yeah, thin refined eyebrows. Sexy.
Adding some more realistic reflections to the tube would add a tremendous amount to this piece. More refraction too.
Also, the bubbles in the container seem to be too static, perhaps creating more of a sense of movement, as if the bubbles are escaping to the air pocket towards the top would help.
Nice.
- Steve |
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