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Pat
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 25, 2001 1:41 am     Reply with quote
This started out as a speed painting, but when I looked up at the clock I'd spent about 2+ hours on it. Whoops. It was just coming along so nicely I kept working it. Anyway, didn't think it was fair to post it in that thread anymore.



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PostPosted: Tue Dec 25, 2001 5:08 am     Reply with quote
everything looks great, but the container on the back of her head looks weird. try adding some depth there.
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 25, 2001 8:03 am     Reply with quote
That chin dude... neat idea to the pic tho.
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 25, 2001 8:35 am     Reply with quote
Very nice! Reminds me of the movie AI! 2 hours huh? You bastard! That would take me a few days at least and I'm sure it wouldn't look that good! I think the container could use a bit more of a "3d" look but at the same time, it seems to work with the overall look of the piece!

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 25, 2001 11:22 pm     Reply with quote
Hey thanks for the input guys! Some great suggestions!

Mr. T, I'll work on that container. I totally forgot to add any type of reflected light on the bottom. It's not even a decent cylinder.

Cos, can you believe the chin was even larger at one point? I reigned it back quite a bit. Maybe some more would help.

funkylizard, I've been sketching a lot of robot gurls lately. Not sure what's up with that, but they're a lot of fun. It kinda reminds me of AI too.

Speve-o-matic, thanks for the tip on the bubbles. I was kinda thinking that when I was working on them, but I was at a loss on how to that. Maybe I'll go buy a plastic bottle of Sprite and check out the bubbles.

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PostPosted: Wed Dec 26, 2001 12:07 am     Reply with quote
Hey Pat.

I like the skintones here, and ooohh yeah, thin refined eyebrows. Sexy.

Adding some more realistic reflections to the tube would add a tremendous amount to this piece. More refraction too.

Also, the bubbles in the container seem to be too static, perhaps creating more of a sense of movement, as if the bubbles are escaping to the air pocket towards the top would help.

Nice.

- Steve
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