[J-D Leon]

hi. long time hav't post.
here is my lastest sketch.
GOT MILK?

was gonna post in on my door in my shcool's residence.(the point is.. hahaha)
got any suggestion that than not clean?



link: http://somsay.8m.com/got-milk.jpg

[audacity10]

What are you hoping to achieve? Will you eventually digitise this?

At the mo' this is very, very basic. His wrists are a bit on the long side and his hands are a tad on the small side. Was this a life sketch?

Er... can you shade?


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Audacity- just phrasing something differently can make a big difference. What kind of a crit is "Er.. Can you shade?" I mean seriously is that supposed to be helpful?

his left "inside elbow" area where it is close to the shirt could use a touch up. Looks like someone took a knife and cut a chunk of his arm out.

keep goin on it

-PZ-

[J-D Leon]

i drew it with my only led pencil!!!

i am very upsad about the first reply.
i know i am not very good at this field. please understand this.
u dont have to depress me like that!!

this is my selfportrait. yes. i drew it when i had free time. thought u guys would give me some good advices.

that focus is on the head. where the hair was wet and the unshave face. i know u expect more than that. but thats the best i can do with my pencil.!!!

hopefully i can get a tablet soon!!

[Ahcri]

Hmm.. I think what he meant in the first reply was that it'll look more finished when you shade or colour it. Other than that, I can't see any problem with the anatomy, although the background is a bit dirty, but you can fix that when you colour it. So far, it looks pretty good. Keep drawing.

[Novacaptain]

ahm...I don't get it. It says "got milk?" and he has "milk" tatooed on his arm...does that mean he's got milk or something? Maybe a background coul help to add to the context.

Anyways: the hands are a little small. The pose in general isn't very dynamic or exciting. The wrinkles on the clothes need more work.

Is this a portrait?