[Rag]

Can someone give me some advice or maybe do a little draw over? This is sort of my first attempt at initial design. Would like some help if someone can.
Thanks
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[xeNusion]

the most important thing is that it should look "believable".
just try t0 imagine what components such a ship has and if you cant identify them change it

... engines/turbines -> cant see them

those strange "cannon" at the front is far too big and the ball on its top looks strange. if its a cannon (doesnt matters if its a projectile,plasma,... whatever) it would never look like this.

at the moment it looks not bad but i wouldnt say that it looks really like a ship.

[ December 16, 2001: Message edited by: xN^md ]

[Lihamyrsky]

it's got too much of the WH40K Eldar Falcon Grav Tank in it.