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SameOldShit
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Location: Toronto,Ontario,Canada
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 Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2001 12:19 am |
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Here's an illustration I'm working on...all crits and comments welcome...I'm super rusty  |
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| Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2001 12:41 am |
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I like your work. The only thing that i would change is the tree on the left. Somehow it looks strange but the rest is just lovely art.
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arkoh
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| Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2001 9:56 am |
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Looks good! There's just one thing i might sugest you changed... I dont like the way the metal at the top of the windscreen is covering the guys mouth... It seems to irritate me a bit! To me, one of the most expressive features is the mouth, and it seems to me that by covering that up, and the eyes!!!!... you make him to anonymous and take alot of emotional power out of the drawing!
I wanna know what he thinks, I wanna know who he is...
[ December 15, 2001: Message edited by: arkoh ] |
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ValarianROOT
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| Posted: Sun Dec 16, 2001 1:15 am |
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| Great Ill man, made me laugh out loud!!! arkoh is 100% right about the mouth thing. But you have to add Hunter S. Thompson's trade mark along with the mouth... cigarette-holder and cig. |
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