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RRoam
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 09, 2001 9:40 am     Reply with quote
going to continue digitally... crits are welcome...



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Steven Stahlberg
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 09, 2001 11:46 am     Reply with quote
A suggestion to make the composition more dynamic - place the viewpoint closer to the action, and make the poses more dynamic, like this:



Diagonal lines and contrasts (of shape, tone, color, anything) create interest and energy. Just be careful to not loose the single focus - there has to be one focal point that stands out more than the others, otherwise it becomes confusing.
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