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Blue boy
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 Posted: Mon Dec 03, 2001 6:07 pm |
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Hi all,
just painted this and like some guide line
on how to make it better ..
Please give me some feedback ...
Thanks!
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Blue boy
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| Posted: Tue Dec 04, 2001 1:04 pm |
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Well?
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Sukhoi
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| Posted: Tue Dec 04, 2001 4:33 pm |
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I kind'a like him better without a chin. Like his stomach is swallowing his face.
Crazy style you've got!!
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Brain
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| Posted: Tue Dec 04, 2001 8:46 pm |
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This is turning out pretty damn cool! Only thing I'd point out is that his fingers are oddly long.
Definately keep at this! |
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XandGash
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Location: Boston, MASS, U.S.A.
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| Posted: Tue Dec 04, 2001 8:52 pm |
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| Shouldn't the gradient light be coming from the other way? |
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Solayna
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| Posted: Wed Dec 05, 2001 1:38 am |
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The only thing that looks REALLY odd is the thing under his nose... What is it? I'm not trying to be mean or anything but I just can't figure out what it is ^^;; I really like the eyes, though. Very striking  The fine pale lines on his stomach are a bit odd looking, though, and the colour of his body and face are slightly different (body=red, face=yellow)
Otherwise it looks great
[ December 05, 2001: Message edited by: Solayna ] |
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Blue boy
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Location: Norway
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| Posted: Wed Dec 05, 2001 6:36 am |
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Hi,and thanks for all the help
Sukhoi: Thanks man .. but i keep the chin.. hmmm i think
Brain: Thanks.Yea, the fingers are oddly long,and i like it . it makes him look more at home in the comp...
XandGash: your right. when i added the gradient light,i didnt care where the light came from.i added it because it helps me add colours....
Solayna: He he well it was supose to look like a lip he he
And the colours ,,hmmm im just a littl colour blind ,, i like to think so
Thanks !
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