[bilka]

critic plz ...

thanks

BILKA .........

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[Davem]

I think the eyes and cheeks might be set too far back into the head making the brindge of the nose too deep. Also the lips look a littel odd. i think its has to do with your join on the bottom lip in the corners, like its a littel too pursed. Try and bring the lip up and into the top lip as a quad rather than triangulating in there. Maybe also push the bottom lip out and donw a bit so that it sticks out more from the chin and top lip....just a little though.

Other than that its looking sweet. What software is it done in?

[Afgun]

Greetings Bilka. Yeahh this head is looking much better that the one before.
But if you dont mind: The forhead looks a little flat. Maybe moving the top-vertics a little bit backward (not too much) would correct this problem. And you know..the ear which looks really good from the structure but this long ear-lap
Oh.. I forgot move the first vertics row of the bridge of the nose a little backward making the nose more triangular from profile (also not too much).
TIP: take the edges of the eyelids and extrude it inwards.If you put eyeballs the eyelids wont look sharpedged.
But really nice head. C U

[bilka]

thanks ...

Cu for the next and i hope the last step