[pro-phet]

i am trying to do a girl /woman /elf playing the flew. but i think i have some problems with the anatomie. c&cs very welcome and needed. sorry for the bad quality but i have no scanner and did this with my webcam




thnx alot

[wigin]

the human figure is one of the hardest things to draw. DONT BE AFRAID TO USE REFERENCE. Either ask someone u knonw to stand in that pose Or go to a life drawing class and ask the model there to stand in that pose. That is the only way you could get this pose right since you are having alot of trouble...

[taff]

her left arm looks crooked, and is too short. i guess you tried to get some perspective in there, with the arm coming towards us. overwork it, i cannot help you with that, just do it again, cause it does not look right, yet.

-her right arm is slightly too short
-she is missing a head, j/k, guess you have big problems there.
-her chest is a bit to thin, her waist to wide, and she has huge hips. I would change that.
-her legs do not look, like they are oing straight downwards, would not work, like she is standing now, she woul probably fall over to her side.

my tip: start a new sketch, and just work with conial shapes, circles, ellipeses and so on, do it, until you get the body right, and then outline her.

[ November 20, 2001: Message edited by: t4fF ]