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5cents
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 Posted: Mon Nov 19, 2001 5:16 pm |
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My most recent work, done today.
This took me about 1.5 hours so far, pencial on paper. Any suggestions or crits VERY welcome. Any ideas for a background?
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edel
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| Posted: Mon Nov 19, 2001 5:33 pm |
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Your mixing of that cartoony style w/ realism works really well. I like this peice a lot. I'd like to see more other than the few you've put online.
MY only suggestion is to show that there's a glass in those frames and maybe show that they're transparent. It's almost like you copped out and just grew weary of adding the little things that would bring it out more.
But yeah, of all the peices you have up this is the one that "does it" for me the most. Big ups.
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also, if you threw in some kick-ass desert city scene or something in the back; it would be fire.
[ November 19, 2001: Message edited by: edel ] |
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Evinem
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| Posted: Mon Nov 19, 2001 5:45 pm |
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Well honestly? I love it, it sort of brings to mind the war in Afghanistan... The only flaw I see so far is the width between the eyes, he must be one very smart person, or the birthe of Nuclear Mutations...
For a background, definitely use a sandly landscape, maybe in a village that has just been conquered by his people... It's your image, and you are the author, that means it's your call.  |
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