[Liser Studios]

this was after all the C&C i got. so, here's the fixes so far... whaddya think? i added some more contrast to the girl and to the trees, but i'm going to add even more.
http://www.geocities.com/keith_patton_2000/wip-temptation6.jpg
btw, the rest of the pic isn't there, it's on big paper and my scanner isn't big enough, but this is all that i edited.

btw, i thought of making it a series... the monk gets tempted and has a few sexy elves around him, kissing him,...etc. and then in the third pic it shows one of them killing him... so they tempted him and then killed him. fun stuff, getting turned on and then turned off for eternity.

[Lomi]

my post is more of a suggestion than a critique, perhaps giving the elven maiden a more "come hither" look rather than a cold calculating "I'm going to eat your babies!" look .