[Blue boy]

Well this is just a fast sketch

And i need some c and some pointers on whats wrong ..

[Blue boy]

Thanks for the tips
On the reference part: well i was just thinking on ultima 9 ,and lord b........

i fixed some of the perspective prob, but im not satisfied with the floor

[KOryH]

Looking good. I like the feel.
You can work on your perspective, and try to get some reference. The use of good reference will always help in the initial stages of a drawing. Then go off from there!
Keep up the good work!

[arkoh]

It really depends on what it is your after!!! If its "just" a compositional artwork, then the 2 point perspectives is usually the right choice, but if its tension you're after, then you might want to change the perspective to a three point perspective! I have No idea how well known in the world of perspective drawing you are, and I am well aware of the fact, that changing this two point pers. into a three point pers. will have your hairs falling in No time, if you're not well sorted in this disciplin, but if you sucseed, you will notice a major change in the feel and tension of the place... you might even use it to change the dominance of the viking in the front /the main character! Looking at him from below and to the side would definately make him look alot more intimidating than he does now!

Another thing... Use the shadowing of the wall in the background to bring out the viking... the different in Whats bright, and whats dark, could be another change I would surgest you do! Bigger contrast would give you more depth, and add exactly what I am after concerning the perspective, more punch to different elements in your artwork... The viking, the armors the atmosphere!!! Have you thought of a light coming from in front of the viking, thus casting shadows upwards?

Otherwise, looking good!!!

[ November 14, 2001: Message edited by: arkoh ]