[edraket]

Hello,
I registered for this forum a while back but it was down then.
So here I am again.
I am working on a 3d character that I plan to use in this 3d/2d comic. All very fairy tale - like.
Here's some pics of the progress...
Please tell me what you think...

[arkoh]

Not bad, Not bad at all!!!

I only have one comment... I am not big on computergenerated people/living beings, but I seem to believe that I can spot a physical problem when I see one!!! I mean she looks real cute, and the body/bonestructure is extremely well done, but when it comes to the attachment of the head to the neck, I think it looks awkward! It looks too much as if the head is balancing on the neck, without being actually connected. It might just be the angel of view, but I still believe you could do a bit of work on this!

Anyway, looks real good!


... ohh yeah, and a little thing on the side here... please give her some eyelashes ahh? The eyes look extremely good, but giving her eyelashes, will help you frame these eyes, thereby making them more powerfull!

[ November 14, 2001: Message edited by: arkoh ]

[edraket]

Ok I can definately see what you mean. The truth is that the neck always gives me problems. I tend to make them too think. I guess I went the other way around.
I have been playing around with the curve of the neck but I guess I should look at it one more time.

Eyelashes are coming up.

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I am not big on computergenerated people/living beings, but I seem to believe that I can spot a physical problem when I see one!!!

Well exactly. Thats why I am here. I have been frequenting other, 3d related forums before and people there always start talking about how I raytraced the eyes, what renderer I should use etc.
That stuff honestly doesn't matter a bit to me.
I just need someone to give me feedback on the design. I reallu like what I have seen so far on this forum.
so thanks.

Ed