[Mindsiphon]

I need to do a portrait for a barkeep.
There are still incomplete areas of this and some fixing needs to be done.

It would be cool if I could get a few constructive crits before completion.

Cheers!

[Basement bound]

Raist it is looking good. Areas to look at:
-The eyes don't look like they are lined up right. He looks almost cross eyed. I have the same problem.
-The clothing needs to be worked inorder to match the detail of the face.
-The hair is looking great, however it needs to be fuller. I still can see the outline for the flat colour of the head. distracting.

hope that helps
JA

[Mindsiphon]

Thanks for pointing that out about the eyes.
I'm not quite sure if its the iris placement or the whole eye structure that's making the eyes look "off".

The clothing will be polished in the final version and the hair will be added. I was going to make him with receding hair but I think I'll add more instead.