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Callao
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 07, 2001 9:21 pm     Reply with quote
Hi. i've been working on this pic, but now i'm stuck. Its not the most interesting of subject matters but none the less. Any crits, ideas, overpaints?
thanx for looking
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Briareos
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 07, 2001 11:35 pm     Reply with quote
I like it, perhaps broaden her shoulders justa smidgin (keep her character), and add some more details to the figures in the back :P
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Mr. T
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 08, 2001 5:21 am     Reply with quote
That sketchy stuff over the nose is disctracting.
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Callao
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 08, 2001 3:24 pm     Reply with quote
thank you for the advice, I'll work on it tonight.
Any other advice?
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 09, 2001 9:58 am     Reply with quote
Nothing much... you might want to make those people in the back a bit more detailed, not too much, just too look more like people. Other than that, the pic looks very nice.
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