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Lunatique
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 Posted: Tue Nov 06, 2001 10:59 pm |
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Since Feburary this year, I've been immersed in photography, writing, and playing drums instead of drawing/painting.
But, here's a piece I've been dickering around with for a long time(some of you probably have seen earlier versions), but could never sit down long enough to finish. I don't know what's stopping me from finishing it.
I'm supposed to add snow piled on her head and shoulder, polish up some of the rougher brush strokes, and add more highlights/detail.
I have no idea when I'll get around to finishing this, so I'll post it now and get it over with.
 
*goes back to writing screenplay*
[ November 06, 2001: Message edited by: Lunatique ] |
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Shiro_tengu
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| Posted: Tue Nov 06, 2001 11:21 pm |
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| I really like this one. Very tastefully done. Its really good. I just can't wait to see it finished. |
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Icannon
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| Posted: Tue Nov 06, 2001 11:35 pm |
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| it looks really nice, it should be finished. her right eye brow seems to be reaching for the sky. |
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Kin Aquila
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| Posted: Wed Nov 07, 2001 3:01 pm |
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right eyebrow is definitly strange ... once you start staring at it.
don't really like the grey-green right side of her face ... but there's no need to change this.
great piece of art. |
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Shiro_tengu
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| Posted: Wed Nov 07, 2001 7:13 pm |
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hi again. That eyebrow was bothering me as well. I hope my little diagram will help you.
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Icannon
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| Posted: Wed Nov 07, 2001 7:17 pm |
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| actually, the right eye takes that same slant, it's just harder to see. |
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Monkey Majick
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| Posted: Wed Nov 07, 2001 7:39 pm |
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| I agree with Shiro. The original looked like she had a heighten brow ridge. Star Trek like. |
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Highfive
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| Posted: Wed Nov 07, 2001 7:39 pm |
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That's a beautiful piece of work, Lunatique. Having the close-up pick shows the detail you've put into the lashes, eyebrows and skin. Well done!
I agree still Shiro's alteration. The angle of the eyebrow does look better there, I'd have to admit. |
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Lunatique
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| Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2001 12:08 am |
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Hey, thanks! It was bothering me too, and I just never had the time to correct it. I usually flip it horizontally to see the mistakes in proportion.
Maybe one day I'll get around to finishing it. My stupid tablet is very tempermental on my laptop, so I can't really do much while I'm without my desktop computer. |
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