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Tyven
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 Posted: Sun Nov 04, 2001 3:14 pm |
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Just started making this guy 
I'm just posting to get some pointers
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Tyven
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| Posted: Mon Nov 05, 2001 2:40 pm |
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Daniel R
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| Posted: Mon Nov 05, 2001 3:48 pm |
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there is a problem with the volume. It looks flat. You have to work on highlights and shadows.
Also, i don't think a profile view is very intersting... It's easier to draw than a 3/4 view.
But you can fix that by "telling a story" with your image. He looks like somebody is talking with him... go on and add something narrative in your pic !
Also, i think the composition is not right. It's a general rule that you give more empty space in the direction where he's looking. (unless you want to give the feeling he's facing a wall, for example)
I'm not sure if everything is understandable ...because of my poor english, excuse me if what i write is not clear. |
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dtitus
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| Posted: Wed Nov 07, 2001 6:07 am |
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Daniel makes some good points, but doesn't touch on the good things.
The fur is looking good as is the general expression and coloring. All in all I think this is a great effort and with a little polishing of the shadows and highlights you'll have a great image.
David http://3d.davidtitusproductions.com |
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