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lildragon
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Location: Mississauga, Ontario, Canada
PostPosted: Mon Nov 05, 2001 3:41 am     Reply with quote
Hi guys, I have a question, I could very well leave this like this but I personally want it to be more "dyanmic"........ I've heard some do's and don'ts regarding the use of dodge/burn...... so I'm looking for any help/pointers.

thanx guys
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Daniel R
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 05, 2001 6:42 am     Reply with quote
personnally, i think the lines are too visible, specially the ones in the pants.

It looks too much like it was made in illustrator.

i would also remove the lines tha are at the articulations of the hands.

Try to give it a more natural-medium look. By varying the line's thickness for example.

(excuse me for my poor english)
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Mr. T
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 05, 2001 7:47 am     Reply with quote
some perspective errors - left foot for an example. try fixin' that.
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Basement bound
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 05, 2001 4:18 pm     Reply with quote
Another perspective problem would be the wrench, it looks like there is more than one perspective being shown. Try looking at it as a very flat rectangular prisim.

JA

ps. perhaps two tonal shadows would help.

[ November 05, 2001: Message edited by: Basement bound ]
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