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J-D Leon
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 05, 2001 11:54 am     Reply with quote
what sup peeps.
finally i figured out how to get the pictures up.

here is a pic of myself, wasn't feeling so confident about myself so, drew a picture by looking at the mirror. thatwas embarassing thouh, looking at the naked me.
anyways, here it is, comment please.



here are the pictures that i post earlier but no one could see it.



if u still can't see it. then follow the link below :-) http://somsay.8m.com/snapshots/me.jpg http://somsay.8m.com/snapshots/hair_sticking.jpg http://somsay.8m.com/snapshots/angle_legs.jpg

atlast, who want to sell your old good balet to me?
i am looking for one, since mouse drawing aint that realistic.

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Kin Aquila
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Location: Chemnitz - Germany

PostPosted: Mon Nov 05, 2001 3:47 pm     Reply with quote
one first-view thought:
first one) the head doesn't fit the body
second one) the face-details wont fit the head-arrangement
third one) effect is less obvious than before ... but ... head doesn't fit the body (adding a positive effect - in this case)

in case you didn't intend this ...

my 2 cents: you concentrated one a single object - while detailing it - without keeping a general picture-overview in mind (sounds weird, i guess)
whenever this happenes to me, i try squinting both eyes or do whatever to blur the image visually ... which helps to get a feeling for the placement of every object in the whole picture.
helps for me, at least ...

a pro for your talent with the lines in general ... they are perfect on the girl.

and ... (hey, you wanted c&c, right? ... human hands, face details and such need practice, practice, practice ... but it's worth it. you got it for eyes ... but not for hands, noses and mouths.

pfft ... these were more than 2 cents, i'm afraid.
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J-D Leon
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 05, 2001 4:09 pm     Reply with quote
oh my god,

you are obsolutely right, everything u said is correct,,
i need more pratice.

3rd picture: this always happen to me, while u finish drawing the basic structure of model, but their necks seems too long, but then u can't change it, because it is too hard to move the hand closer to the body,

1st picture: it is quiet hard to learn how to draw hands, i am trying to find out the technique,

thanks for the comments...
that helps alot, i will keep praticingl.
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