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Berg
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 Posted: Sat Nov 03, 2001 4:18 am |
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I went for dramatic lighting. I'm not an experienced artist nor do I have the blessing to be able to crit my own work very well yet, so I was hoping that you guys could give me pointers.
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Mr. T
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| Posted: Sat Nov 03, 2001 5:54 am |
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The biggest problem here is the nose. It seems like it's in the front view. And the eyes are a bit too large. Also, try to make it less contrasty, the head shape is totally lost.
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Berg
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| Posted: Sun Nov 04, 2001 12:09 am |
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thx for the comments 
I worked a bit on the nose (satisfactorily?)
I really want to stay with this level of contrast (I'm planning to take the scetch out for some variations on this, with different lighting and maybe color)
I still have to play with the eyes (which is quite alot of work - I could move the eyelids down a bit though...hm
anyone else?
[ November 03, 2001: Message edited by: Berg ] |
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