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Mieja
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 23, 2001 10:51 pm     Reply with quote
Angel
What do you about it ?
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dARCKLOWN
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 24, 2001 12:44 am     Reply with quote
thats pretty good man though i do think the face has a sort of male quality to it mabye its the shading or somthing
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Gothic Gerbil
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 25, 2001 10:05 am     Reply with quote
Your background is awesome, I love the flow and colour and scheme to it! Very nice work there indeed. The wings also look very neat, they have a nice form to them. But sadly, I think your character leaves something to desire. She (I'm assuming female here, but I could easily picture a male as well) comes across as rather flat and disproportionate. Your arms seem to twist, the eyes seem a bit high up on the head and there doesn't really seem to be a back to the head either, and her hips seem rather squished vertically (I think it is vertical, I always mix up horizontal and vertical sorry) and her right hand is flowing into the left arm. She doesn't quite seem attached to the wings either. Your lighting is a bit ambiguous too. I think if you can study up a bit more on anatomy and fix her up you'd have a really awesome piece here! Is she shedding feathers? It is kind of looking like that now that I take another look.
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