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Topic : "Fun Woman. (sort of nude) quick render anyone?" |
sonjiah
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 Posted: Sun Oct 14, 2001 5:49 pm |
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I just started drawing this woman one day, but I put it as side because I got too busy. I thought I'd put up on Sijun because I thought I might work on it again.
I'd appreciate any feedback anyone has.
http://members.iinet.net.au/~bruyer/woman_small.jpg
[ October 14, 2001: Message edited by: sonjiah ]
[ October 14, 2001: Message edited by: sonjiah ]
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LeChuck
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| Posted: Sun Oct 14, 2001 6:05 pm |
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| I have no problem with it. But you might want to put on your flame retardant suit just to be safe. |
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Icannon
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| Posted: Sun Oct 14, 2001 7:44 pm |
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you should note in the topic when there's nudity (or something).
i dont see a reason for flaming, otherwise. it's artistic.. it looks like you either winged the anatomy or used a reference and weren't thinking about the forms you were portraying. most of it is quite nice, but her face is quite flat and her right arm is short and odd looking. her shoulders seem to be different sizes. what are you gonna do with it? |
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sonjiah
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| Posted: Sun Oct 14, 2001 7:47 pm |
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I did use a reference to draw her basic outline but I detailed her myself.
Not sure what to do with it. Any suggestions? |
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Shiro_tengu
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| Posted: Sun Oct 14, 2001 10:21 pm |
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hi,
like it. Actually, I liked your entire portfolio! |
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Monkey Majick
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| Posted: Mon Oct 15, 2001 4:48 pm |
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| How about coloring her in. This picture is itching for some Wacom tablet action. |
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sonjiah
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| Posted: Sun Oct 21, 2001 7:10 pm |
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| Does anyone want to have a quick go at rendering this pic? |
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dARCKLOWN
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| Posted: Sun Oct 21, 2001 11:30 pm |
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just one thing
her right arm i think is totally messes up from pretty much the elbow its all out of proportion but apart from that really nice |
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