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hethebar
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 10, 2001 5:43 pm     Reply with quote
Hey again.
This is the other work I mentioned. It's more conceptual, more fantastical. I like doing this kind of thing. By the way, what do you think of the new site? Does it download quick enough? That was a big problem last time.






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Anthony
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 10, 2001 9:43 pm     Reply with quote
Hey there, nice job! The first is best, the second second, and the third last. :] I guess you want to colors cartoony, so no complaints there. In the second image, I'd suggest more detail in the walls and pillars. Stick a faint glowing haze in the background, defining the shadowed sides of the pillars. In the 3rd image, you need way more dark darks in there: If a whole image is bright, then the light doesn't seem as bright as if it has something to contrast against. I'm not sure that that image is portraying, so I won't crit further. Nice job, keep it up!
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Redlemons
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 10, 2001 11:22 pm     Reply with quote
I'm with Anthony. The first one looks excellent, if only it was in a higher resolution. It looks like something from Monkey Island.

The second has a lot of potential. I love its simplicity.

The third one strikes me as being a part of something bigger. Almost like a section of another painting, focused upon. I like it a lot, and it leaves me wondering what is just beyond the image's borders.

EDIT: That's right, no HTML.

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 11, 2001 12:04 pm     Reply with quote
Thanks guys. That last one was a real quicky, you're right. I'll be working on some finished work now. Monkey Island inspires everthing I do I think. Go figure.

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