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hethebar member
Member # Joined: 26 Feb 2001 Posts: 138 Location: OC.CA
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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2001 5:43 pm |
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Hey again.
This is the other work I mentioned. It's more conceptual, more fantastical. I like doing this kind of thing. By the way, what do you think of the new site? Does it download quick enough? That was a big problem last time.
[ October 10, 2001: Message edited by: hethebar ] |
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Anthony member
Member # Joined: 13 Apr 2000 Posts: 1577 Location: Winter Park, FLA
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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2001 9:43 pm |
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Hey there, nice job! The first is best, the second second, and the third last. :] I guess you want to colors cartoony, so no complaints there. In the second image, I'd suggest more detail in the walls and pillars. Stick a faint glowing haze in the background, defining the shadowed sides of the pillars. In the 3rd image, you need way more dark darks in there: If a whole image is bright, then the light doesn't seem as bright as if it has something to contrast against. I'm not sure that that image is portraying, so I won't crit further. Nice job, keep it up! |
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Redlemons junior member
Member # Joined: 09 Oct 2001 Posts: 20 Location: Melbourne, Australia
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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2001 11:22 pm |
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I'm with Anthony. The first one looks excellent, if only it was in a higher resolution. It looks like something from Monkey Island.
The second has a lot of potential. I love its simplicity.
The third one strikes me as being a part of something bigger. Almost like a section of another painting, focused upon. I like it a lot, and it leaves me wondering what is just beyond the image's borders.
EDIT: That's right, no HTML.
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hethebar member
Member # Joined: 26 Feb 2001 Posts: 138 Location: OC.CA
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Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2001 12:04 pm |
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Thanks guys. That last one was a real quicky, you're right. I'll be working on some finished work now. Monkey Island inspires everthing I do I think. Go figure.
/hethe |
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